I was walking down the street when I saw a small wooden box by the road. Suddenly I heard a voice say “HELP. Let me out of here.” To my surprise the voice was coming from the box I walked over to the box and looked down. There was nothing. So I started to walk away when voice said “Hey you. Can you let me out please.” When I looked back into the box I fall into it I kept falling and falling. Then I hit the ground and passed out. When I woke up I was in a forest. I looked around there was a someone sitting on a rock looking at me.
“um…where I am I” asked the boy on the rock. He looked about ten
4 comments:
this sounds too much like alice in wonderland but it would be cool to end it with the kid finding his way back out.
haha that was good whos the ten year old boy tho and ya it was kinda scary with a guy just right there looking at u out of no were when u wake up wtf...ha fuuny.
i like it. it reminds me of alice in wonderland. would like to know where this story is heading
This sounds like a story that I could be very interested in. You should continue this.
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