Two men walk two paths. The older but younger looking takes the “Path of All Plain Sight.” The younger chooses the “Path of Short Sight.”
The older, standing alone with the sunshine, thinks to himself, “If light were to fight its way through solids, then what makes I?” Curiosity filled his heart while depression drowned his brain. He was lost in his questions yet what he didn’t know was that his answers were right in front of him.
The younger was lost in his adrenaline. Looking at a pond that reflects an almost perfect picture blurred by the ripples of the wind.
7 comments:
I think itz good 4 tha mozt part but it could uze juzt a lil longer of a story....
i like the whole thing. it was really good...just make it longer
I think itz good but it could be a lil longer but 4 tha mozt part itz tight!
its very poetic and i like that they both cross two different paths and each get there own answer so i would finish this by ending it with one of them choosing the right path.
wow bro hahah. your pretty good :D i like it remimnds me of a poem.
I really enjoyed this story. It has got a lot of detail, and I enjoy the depth of thought. You should definately continue this story.
ramon add some more to the story and at the end off it have it finish with the guy finding the right path
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